Friday, 11 March 2016

100 Word Challenge - The Key

I was walking to my mums car and I saw a key in the grass and then I saw a door in front of me and then. I put the key in the door and, I saw a lot of things like mario, money, shark, fishing rod.  hot rod, V8, school, buss, gold. And when I got to the car I told my mom and my brothers that I found. A lot of staff and I love it and my Mom and brothers said omg that stan’s for. O my god.

My Reflection:

I was learning to use 
describing words to
give my writing more
meaning. I found this
easy because you 
just need to write
100 words. Next time 
I will work on is to make it more in christening

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

Well done, Calais! This was a great first go at one of our 100 word challenges. Remember to check your spelling and reread your work during the editing stage of your writing to make sure it makes sense.